US Fertility · Egg Retrieval · Control
REVISION 1
Control group · Responding to your 2026-05-29 feedback

Lighter. Graphics-led.
Calmer.

Revision 1 rebuilds the Egg Retrieval Control around your direction: brighter grounds with branded elements, illustration leading and photography supporting, your own office b-roll instead of stock — and a simpler, lower-anxiety read. Every note you sent is answered below, with live motion and illustration samples you can play right here.

ScopeControl only
Scenes13 · ~112–118s
VoiceProfile A — Warm Clinical Authority
SystemUSF Modern Editorial · Light
StatusFor your review
The system at a glance

Color palette.

The Revision-1 light system: USF brand colors used as ink, accent and linework over warm-white grounds and pale act tints. Cranberry is the primary; Gold appears exactly once (the Scene 8 reveal).

Cranberry
#571759
Primary · chapter rules
Navy
#261759
Headline ink
Emerald
#0E635D
Schematic linework
Periwinkle
#8598E3
Accent · preparation
Mint
#8DCA8B
Accent · recovery
Gold
#FFBB06
Signature ×1 · Scene 8
Paper
#F7F5EF
Warm-white ground
Periwinkle wash
#EEF1FB
Preparation tint
Emerald wash
#E7F0EE
Procedure tint
Mint wash
#EBF4EA
Recovery tint
Your feedback → what we did

Every point, answered.

Seven directional notes and eight scene notes. Here's the overall direction; the scene-by-scene resolutions are further down with live mockups.

"Can we make it brighter… white background with branded elements?"

From dark grounds to light.

The whole frame system flips. v1 built every scene on deep Navy. Revision 1 builds on warm white and pale tints, with the USF brand colors used as ink, accents and linework. Headlines stay deep Navy, so it reads bright and airy — never washed-out. Same scene, both treatments:

v1 — reviewedNavy full-bleed ground
Scene 06 · Procedure
A short, planned procedure
10 to 30 minutes, under anesthesia.
Revision 1Light ground · brand accents · USF b-roll
Scene 06 · Procedure
A short, planned procedure
10 to 30 minutes, under anesthesia.
USF procedure-room b-roll
Motion, the procedure & overlay — in production

The moving pieces, in progress.

You asked to see transitions/motion, how we illustrate the procedure (1:00–1:22), and how graphics sit over your footage. I'm building all three in After Effects right now — here are reference frames for each so you can see the intended look while the motion demo is finished.

Sample 01 · Transitions & motion
How the graphics move

Calm and premium — cross-dissolves between scenes, elements that draw on, chips that float up, soft act-to-act wipes. Nothing bounces or spins; everything resolves to stillness.

Reference frame — transitions and motion
Motion demo in progress
I'm generating the motion of text and graphics in After Effects
the animated motion sample is coming next.
Reference frame
Sample 02 · The procedure, illustrated (your 1:00–1:22)
How we show the retrieval

The hero scene as a calm editorial schematic — follicles, an ultrasound-guided fine needle, gentle suction into the collection tube. Accurate and reassuring, never graphic or anatomical.

Reference frame — the retrieval procedure
Motion demo in progress
Illustrating the retrieval with AI
Need confirmation on the graphic style to proceed
Reference frame
Sample 03 · Graphics over b-roll
How graphics sit on your footage

Please share the office b-roll mentioned — so no clip ever feels like stock.

Reference frame — graphics over b-roll
Motion demo in progress
Compositing graphics over b-roll in After Effects
Reference frame shown — the graphics-over-footage overlay is being built.
Reference frame
The full Control, scene by scene

All 13 scenes, in the new light system.

Live light-system mockups (graphics rendered in-browser; photographed scenes show framed b-roll stand-ins until your footage arrives). Each scene flags exactly what changed from v1.

To finish the Control

What we need from you.

Office & lab b-roll

The library you mentioned — procedure rooms, lab, reception. We'll light-grade + frame it into Scenes 4, 5, 6 (and optionally 11–13).

Scene 4 ↔ 5 confirm

Your "office" note landed on the timing scene; we applied it to both. Tell us which you meant.

Marketing sign-off

On the clinical stats still in VO (Scenes 6–10) — accuracy retained, just no longer the loud visual.